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Mothers Prayer

God bless my home
God bless this world
God bless the children
Every boy and every girl

God bless this life
God bless this time
God bless my heart
And the heart that
Beats next to mine

God bless the moms
Who bring the children here
God bless the dads
Who stand by their sides

God bless the pets
So pure and true
God bless the love
From me to you

God bless this chance
This chance we take
God bless each breath
Each breath we make

God bless my world
God bless my kids
God bless my life
And free me from
The sins I did

God bless my husband
God bless this place
God bless my children
Let them run free

God bless you lord
And the son you sent
To save us all
And our sins repent

Thank you Lord
For the life you give
Thank you lord
For the lives we live

Thank you lord
For the angels you send
Thank you lord
For every prefect end

Thank you lord
For my kids
Thank you lord
For my love

Thank you lord
I say once more
Thank you lord
For what you have
In store for…

Me…

Amen

Author notes

I am not a mother... but when I imagine a mother praying this is what I think... yes I know some stanzas are longer than others... that was on purpose...
Written October 10th, 2005

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  • Qzie
    November 16, 2005
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    absolutely lovely

    I thought it was really good...beautiful flow and rhythm and a great topic in general. ^^


  • Kitsune-Tears
    October 13, 2005
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    what do you mean?


  • dp robertson
    October 13, 2005
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    thank you lord but no

  • -Mary-Duffy-
    October 11, 2005
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    talented!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Such a beautiful and remarkble write. I loved it and thought it was so lovely. This is a prayer I would use every day and thank you for writing it. There's a lot of love in it and it some thing I do myself want to thank god for.

    Great work on this poem it is so brillant and good luck with many more wonderfull writes.

    Mary