dream, of a far away land
full of birthday parties and pictures
of when we were young
of party hats,
pinatas,
baby dolls and more
to a far away place
with rainbows and
pots of gold,and
leprachans
to a place full of lollipops and bubblegum clouds
where the rain is of chocolate and the air of gold
there is not a cloud in sight or one gloomy face
the land in our dreams, where we can escape
the one where we are on top of the world and looking down
the dream where our memories are forgotten and happiness takes over
this world we wish to visit all day long
under the covers on a rainy day
or into the cupboards for cookies in milk
these places we remember, the ones we wish we could stay
Author notes
please read this poem, i hope it makes you smile
Written October 10th, 2005
A contest entry
- Turn my frown around by Aldo the great.
300 points, ended March 2, 2006, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Only Imagination! by AwesomeJoshsome.
525 points, ended February 3, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
-
This made my eyes water up and brought a smile too... nice. Thanks for entering it in my contest -Pome
-
Your poems are really happy and they pick one up. Loved the imagery and the flow. Thanks for posting this.
-
This was a very nice poem. I would love a place like that. Thank you for the smile and good luck in the contest.
-
This was very refreshing. I enjoyed it.
Hugs, Lady Raven
Adding your comment:
