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Bat

I once saw a bat
exercising on a mat
then he said to me
"I jump like and flea
and fly like a bee
I looked around
and then at the ground
then he said
"before I go to bed
I must go see Fred"
this bat was very amusing
and quite very confusing
he then went to fly
very high into the sky
on my chair I sat
and watched for that bat
"Oh wait
I forgot my bait"
there he was again
he went into his den
I sat there being lazy
thinking he was quite crazy
then off he flew
into a night unknew

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Written October 10th, 2005

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  • Maddy16
    October 16, 2005
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    heehee this is really funny. awesome poem!


  • Mysterier silver member
    October 10, 2005
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    this is one of the strangest and funniest things i've read in a while. thanks for sharing this lol.