My new pet, and mine alone
Your everything is now mine
Precious, your ties are broken now;
Ripped from your hands and chained away from you
Eternally, just as you are chained to me and you
Can never go back on your offering of yourself
I am your only purpose; you serve me and listen to
Only me, for as long as I keep you as my pet
Understand this, child, that you will not be ill treated
So long as you are obedient, but will be treated with affection
Precious, know that I do love you, though I may not show it
Even in my stern actions, I care for you and you come first
Though I may be hard on you, or cruel, I love you in my own twisted way
Author notes
Sorry for the whole love thing, but I thought you wouldn't mind something like this, since it isn't your everyday kind of love, but twisted in a way that it almost doesn't seem like love at all.
Inspired by Opaque Beauty's character, Sharazon, and my character, Kira.
Written October 10th, 2005
In a list
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A contest entry
- Dark and Romantic Poems by street-crazy.
300 points, ended October 22, 2005, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Aww maybe I get Shar better than I let on. That twisted love thing...yeah. *stares at him dreamily* Haha nicely done. Kinda makes me wanna try my hand at acrostics. *has never done one*
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The love thing is perfect because that's what they are. A kind of alternate relationship.
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That kind of relationship is odd in itself. Thank you for your comment and best of luck with judging.
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Although this poem was odd, I liked it. Especially the final stanza. It was passionate in it's own special little way. Good luck in the contest.
Well, live on and live again. Cya -
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. Good luck with judging.
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Thank you for the entry and I like the whole love thing it was nice.
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No! MSN if you're online. D:
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I love the whole pet thing. I assume you want me to send it through email? I'll do that now. Thank you for your comment. <3
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OOOOH
I love this!
I know it's about Kira and Zon.. but it reminds me of Mana and Kanaye. XD
Well that's how i can relate to it anyway. XP But yes, it's really good. I love the part about the chains!
Oh and you still need to send me that thingy. o.o; -
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You gonna make it even for K/Z?
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No, no, no! I've only written four or five things with K/Z. I've written over a dozen about R/Z.
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wow Rose! This is a fantastic acrostic! You do write loads on Rose/Kira and Zon but I love them so that compensates.
A great read and good luck in the contest too!
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Thank you, darling.
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Love it. <3 I hope you win the contest dear.
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I admit it! *wears the sign you were holding* At elast I've stopped obsessing over Rose and Zon! For the most part...
I'm glad you don't mind though. Lmao. And thank you for your lovely comments, as always. <3
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Bwahahaha! ~ Held up a sign reading: OBSESSIVE. ~ Yessss... You know I don't mind, though.. Because.. Uhmm.. YEAH. I think you write about Zon and Kira MUCH more wonderfully than I could. <3 Why? 'Cause I'm overly-self-critical..As you know. Mm'hmm.. Not a lot else I can say .. Other thannnn.. GOOD LUCK!
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