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Cat on a Bed


She stares at me
Across the sheets,
So content,
She almost smiles.

She murmurs her delight,
Her eyes half veiled
Her beauty
Black as night.

Author notes

I had a cat called Velvet she was a black beauty (hence my name) this poem is in her honour ; although you could read it to mean other things if you wanted
Written October 10th, 2005

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  • BehindTheseEyes
    October 10, 2005
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    i love it, it's great, i love how cats do that and cats in general are just awesome, great job

  • Virtual Velvet
    October 10, 2005
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    Thank you! Thanks for the definition of haiku. This site is really good fun - but I think I should leave you to it now it's getting late for me!

  • tmullins
    October 10, 2005
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    this is really good. and it could mean so much more besides a cat! great job.