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hope in the darkest of places

anger and sadness walk hand in hand
all across my soul, my land
holding all that pain inside
when ever you asked i lied
i need to protect my heart my soul
but that has taken its tole
but dont feel sorry for me
i made myself like this you see
so if i push you away
no that what im trying to say
is that im hurt but you cant see the pain
im about to go of the tracks, im a train
but i hide it in a deep well in my mind
a well thats hard to find
its a selfish act its true
but ive thought it through
and i dont want to face the pain
but i wont die to keep sane
so dont think less of me, think more
because inside im fighting a silent war
but thanks to you im positive ive won
without you i dont know what i would have done

Author notes

this poem was written after untitled after i had come out of my depression

Written October 10th, 2005

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  • 8 blacklights
    December 30, 2005
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    WOW, i have been there before i am still in recover cuz i had alot of emotioal stress.But anyway I loved your poem

  • peridot 290
    October 29, 2005
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    this is powerful...i know exactly how you feel - i've felt the same at times. great job! (i'm glad you came out of your depression)