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My Precious

She fingered her leather collar, three silver loops attached, as Kira thought. She smiled, tugging at the leash keeping her attached to him. 'How much longer?'

Sharazon smirked lovingly at his pet, grasping the leash tighter to keep control of himself. 'Soon, Precious.'

As the rain fell sensually upon them, she smiled dreamily. He was wonderful to her, even though he seemed cruel; but his love showed. Even through her doubts in the beginning, she knew by his gentle touch and loving smile.

The time did come; he roamed her ashen flesh, pouring his love inside, whispering, 'My Precious...My everything...'

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Kira is mine. Sharazon is Opaque Beauty's.
Written October 10th, 2005

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  • Seven Kinky
    August 11

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    The idea of a pet relationship is incredibly sexy. That being said...THIS was really sexy! Hehehe. Loved it, my dear.

  • I just love this series, thank you so much. I have one of these relationships, my Master and I love your work.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    October 21, 2005
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    Thank you for your lovely comment. I'm a bit sitten with this kind of relationship these days. Maybe a little over-obsessed. I'm glad, though. that it touched you since you did have a frozen heart...but I think we managed to finally melt it.


  • Kain
    October 20, 2005
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    Beautiful, my dear Rose. A sensual touch to a taboo subject (in my mind, anyways). I adore the last few lines, I can ponder on that image all night. All night indeed.. So beautiful, I have to applaud..

    Your friend,
    Kain

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    October 10, 2005
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    Confused...More like...just needs someone else to be his stability. *nods* Glad I'm able to capture him so well. I'd be upset if I couldn't after so long! Thank you for commenting, darling.
    Edited on Oct 10, 5:51 p.m. because ''.

  • Victoria of Aragon
    October 10, 2005
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    Hahah; Yuna, darling.. Zon doesn't use his pets, silly girl. He's only kept Helen to protect her, and now he's just.. "Keeping" Kira because.. Well.. He's confused, I guess? Lmao.. I dunno..

    Uhm.. YES! Lovely write, as usual, darling Rose. <3 You always do seem to capture Zon's ways of thinking perfectly.

  • crimsonshadow
    October 10, 2005
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    <333333

    Okay, yes, I settled with you on IM why this is so lovely but I love it!!!


    me

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    October 10, 2005
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    At least he looooves her...It shows. He does love her after all...He's just screwed up because of his past.

  • Yunaleska gold member
    October 10, 2005
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    I don't know. I think that's it's because he keeps a 'pet' and uses them. even if they ARE willing.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    October 10, 2005
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    I don't find it creepy at all, but that might be because I'm used to Zon and his ways. What do you find creepy about him?

  • Yunaleska gold member
    October 10, 2005
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    Aww. This is such a sweet write though it's a little creepy when you know Zon and his ways. Great write!
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