Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Gonna' get your Cola

I wanna have your cola babay!
I wanna have it now
I wanna have your cola babay!
Taste in in my mouth!

I'm gettin' a little closa baby!
I'm gettin' on my knees
I'm gonna get your cola baby!
I'm beggin' for it please

I    wanna get it now
Feel it in my fingers...
So thick and sweet
slippin' down my throat

Author notes

I was extremely hi when I wrote this song.. no, it's not a sexual reference, but if you wanna take it that way, then that's fine with me. I just got stoned and creative at the same time and created this song. I know music would sound great with it, but it's not quite finished yet, I think I'd like to elaborate on it, and then  hire somebody to sing it. I've got it all in my head..but I'm afraid my voice won't do it justice.
Written October 10th, 2005

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Gypsy Dancer
    October 10, 2005
    Edit | Reply

    funny funny

    This is a really cute piece, especially for being stoned. Wonderful job....its funny, and definitly can be taken as a sexual reference, I read your comment after I had already assumed as much about it... Good job...

    N