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One more time

here I sit,
in a world made truly beautiful by those around me
surrounded by love, and the promise of a bright future

and I take a hit

I feel the despair
the pain wracking my being
the deep, enveloping darkness

I feel my own silent cries

and I take the hit

...just one more time

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This is the latest for "Depression is  Drug", and it will be added as soon as AP does another promotion for Silver or Gold membership.
Written October 10th, 2005

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  • December 17, 2005
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    mesmerising

    oh, so mesmerising. this is reminds me of a word i can't remember, i see this beautiful queen cloaked in shadows, she draws you in and enraptures you with her beauty and mourning. like a black hole, beautiful, mysterious and so dominating. hmmm, it appears i have got far too sentimental. but this really IS great, keep it up.


  • Little Ribbit
    October 10, 2005
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    Actually it was a mostly random burst of depression that hit me last night, which had been building for a couple of days without much focus. Don't feel bad for not knowing what's going on. *hugs* I'll filter you into the journal entry I wrote about it as well. I'm doing better today, I think.

  • Scarred Angel Poet
    October 10, 2005
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    For once, I can actually say I'm not quite sure what sparked this and for that, I apologize. I've been so busy with college stuff and marching band. But besides that, the sense of hopelessness in this piece can drown a reader. And also peak their curiousity.

    ~J~