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To Good to Be True

The only way of life I once knew,
Went completely out the door with you.
My tears have now all gone away,
Once again, I see the light of day.
You gave me your unique one look,
That for me right there, is all it took.

The beautiful smile you always give me,
Don’t you know it, tell me don’t you see.
I am only yours, ‘til death do us  part,
You gave me your unique one look,
That for me right there, is all it took.

You are but just a wonderful dream,
Love in my heart is pulling a seam.
It is to absolutely to be true, the kiss,
Every time, the never ending bliss.
You gave me your unique one look,
That for me right there, is all it took.


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Written October 7th, 2005

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  • BigBadMuffin
    August 4, 2006
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    Great beginnning it brings you in right away. i love those first two lines. hah and i love that " the one look" One look could mean the world to someone, and in this piece youve pretty much just said that. i like it! nice job old friend