She called herself a friend,
though I know she is not,
I thought I could trust her,
But I was proved naught.
You tell me I hurt you,
let me tell you,
I was hurt,
Because YOU were untrue,
I thought you could be trusted,
But I guess not,
Our friendship is nomore,
And it's not my fault
You betrayed my feelings
With the guy you knew
I had feelings for and you did too.
We made a pact but you broke it
But don't worry It won't be broken again
Because we are over forever and again
Author notes
I read the following poems.
Why by General 1948
I never thought By Coffee lover
Written October 9th, 2005
A contest entry
- Betrayal by Neon Lights.
300 points, ended October 28, 2005, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I've been in that situation before and it sucks! Good write. Really loved the flow and the tone to it. I could really feel the emotion you put into this. Very nice write! Thanks for entering and good luck!
~Fi~
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I like this one and i think i know who its about job well done
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awsome write... it was so deep..
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