On Thanksgiving Day
I love her sweet pumpkin pie
and her shapely ass
Author notes
Written October 9th, 2005
A contest entry
- Haiku III part 2 by Melissa Gayle.
300 points, ended October 12, 2005, 2 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
1 - 14 of 14
-
... and how was that pumpkin pie ? LOL
:-) -
hahaha...this is just so very "you"...
reminds me of the longer type version i did last year...well, at least it had the same kind of Thanksgiving sentiments...lmao
UB
-
brilliant
ahahahah! this poem is hilarious, wasnt expecting that at all! like her pie,... and her ass lolll -
and you like stuffing
the turkey
with the volumptuous breasts
lol
-
I love this, it made me laugh, smile and shake my head. Perfect.
-
he he he .. I like some yam with my pumpkin.
-
The stuffing is implied.
-
Very good Cisco! GOod luck in the contest
Peace
*Lust* -
Wouldn't know what to eat first... the ass or the pie eh'??
lololololololol
Don't forget the whipped cream hun...
tasty haiku hun... almost edible words here
~GILL~xxx -
I forgot to say I like it.
I like it.
-
Oh, a nod to Canadian thanksgiving. My ass is full of sweet pumpkin pie right this very minute.
Only you, Cisco, could pull this off. Loving and dirty at the same time. (I say "dirty" lovingly, of course.)
Seems I have a few friends in this contest.
-
Unexpected was line three! LOL! Well, you eiether love this girl, or have your mind in the gutter in some way...or both...LOL! I was just kidding..hope you know that!
Well, you did an awesome job on this haiku...and I wonder if you will consider putting this in the humor category!???
Good luck in the contest! -
Funny!
ROFL......lol......L3 was a total surprise!! I like how you used a season(kigo) here. Good senryu
Charishma -
This is perfect! If you'd mentioned turkeys, Id have lost all faith in you! LOL
Aren't you glad Thanksgiving is coming up soon? LOL
Adding your comment:
1 - 14 of 14
20 old applause
