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A Poem for a Rose

Radiant beauty
Of heart and of mind
Shining through
Each poem and rhyme.

Dazzling talent
And flawless writes.
Revealing truths,
Kindness and fights.

Trust and strength is
How each poem shows
Of all the beauty and feelings she glows,
Revealing emotions she wishes to hide and will
Now and forever be my AP twin and guide.

Author notes

Eek! I hope you like it Rose or I'll feel so stupid.
Written October 9th, 2005

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Comments

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  • Awakendragonking84
    October 10, 2005
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    bad ass!!! i love it too!!!

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    October 9, 2005
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    Why wouldn't I like it? I love it!

  • Yunaleska gold member
    October 9, 2005
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    Thanks Lauren.

  • Yunaleska gold member
    October 9, 2005
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    Eek! You went ahead and read it! Well, at least you like it. Thanks for commenting.

  • crimsonshadow
    October 9, 2005
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    Awww This is so cute and beautiful and I think it was lovely, it depicts Rose wonderfully. Great job!
    -Lauren

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    October 9, 2005
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    Awww...you KNOW I had to read this write? Thank you, sweetie! It's all sweet and pretty and, and, and.... I don't know what to say! Thank you! Thank you, thank you, thank you, my gorgeous little twinny!

  • Yunaleska gold member
    October 9, 2005
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    thanks tink. Well, she deserves it because she is a wonderful person.
  • Ms Tinkerbell
    October 9, 2005
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    Ahhhh how could she not like ??? Its beautiful, truelly is a work of art and so very light and fresh ( a bit unlike you hon ) You have a done a perfect job at dedicating your emotions to someone with this piece, I love it
    Tinker xx

  • Yunaleska gold member
    October 9, 2005
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    thanks

  • Anah
    October 9, 2005
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    good!

    that was cute...she's lucky

  • Yunaleska gold member
    October 9, 2005
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    thank you!

  • October 9, 2005
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    Aw, this is a truly beautiful poem. I'd be really happy if I was receiving something like this, it's full of love, and warmth. Very sweet piece, I loved it.
    Take care. xo
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