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Would you say you Felt the Same?

Sitting beside me
Silent and concentrating
On the images passing by
On the television

So Close to me
Yet so far away
I long to reach out,
to touch you
But every time I pull away

You mock me with being there
So sweet and innocent
Yet dangerous in
Your gorgeous features

Stifled screams race
Inside my mind, wishing
To be heard by you
I want to Be with you
Forever be beside you

But alas, this
My proclimation of the heart
Lies inside my mind
Vowing my feelings to you

If only you understood
Could comprehend everything
Left unsaid in time
Could you only read my mind
Would you tell me you felt the same?

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Written October 9th, 2005

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