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The Star

Shining dully, faintly, but there-
Huddling amongst galaxies of galaxies.
Inner flame is nearly extinguished
Just about gone, but provoking aware
Intimate dreams prevail, fade-
Ecstasy would come, but hasn’t.


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Written October 9th, 2005

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  • October 9, 2005
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    Wow. This is such a gorgeous poem. I love your choice of words, every one is beautiful. This piece comes together perfectly, and it's originality makes it even more stunning. Thanks for sharing, this was amazing. Take care. xo