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you

baby,
you're more than my favorite.

you are perfection personified.

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Written October 9th, 2005

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  • milkdrop
    October 10, 2005
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    sweet


  • Magik
    October 9, 2005
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    I like that...despite its rediculously short length, and lack of details... I like the whole perfection personified thing. I mean seriously that's really a good concept, and if you dont mind I'll probably use that in my poetry,