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Unwanted Breeze

Deception is not how nature is inclined
lying sound waves blowing in the breeze
humankind always being unkind
We're waved off by the trees with a sneeze

Ellis

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Speak truth
Written October 9th, 2005

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  • lostdreamer101
    November 25, 2007

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    I LOVE it. It makes me smile when I read it I especially like the last line

    "....with a sneeze"

    Is the best part


  • parody of paradise
    October 9, 2005
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    Quick

    what a little ditty,
    kinda cute and witty,
    society can be a killer,
    make your pen spill (er!)

    paying you back for your cute rhymes on my page!