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Lilbluboy

His screen name was Lilblueboy and Mat had met him over the Internet. Mat had never been one for online dating but one of those pop ad’s just caught his eyes and working its magic on him- got him singing up into a dating service. It was very odd for him to do this because Mat was always skeptical of everything. He was a good-looking twenty year old guy. He had dark brown hair, blue eyes, and a nice tan that came from hard work out routine and once a week at the tanning bed. There isn’t a more self-conscious person then Mat. He had to have his hair spiked up perfectly; he had to have his pants just right, his shirts just tight enough, and his eyebrows just perfect before he went anywhere. He would stand in front of a mirror and look at his butt to make sure the pants were just right. It was a perfect ass no matter what pants- as many guys would say, or you could tell simply from all the looks that followed him as he walked in a bar. It was nice and tight and well--- rather perfect, but Mat- is rather hard on himself. Perhaps that is why he joined this internet dating service. He always felt depressed, like nobody wanted him, ashamed of his own face, of his job, of his life. There was no reason for him to be so, but since his last boyfriend left him he had been quite insecure. They had been together for five years and it was his first love. Mat would have to admit, still, even today, he loved him. Sadly  the relationship ended when Mat’s first partner cheated on him and left him for another guy. Thus, Mat for many months wondered what the hell was wrong with him. He was seeing a doctor for depression and took Prozac- it helped.

As he sat in his seat talking to Lilblueboy online and told him of how he met his first boyfriend he was remind of the painful fact that his first boyfriend, Jason, took his virginity. He had wanted to save it until he ran into the perfect person and he thought Jason was the one. If only it were so. As he sat in the chair he recalled that night. The two of them were in his parents house. His dad didn’t know he was gay quite yet and they were in his bedroom. The door was locked and they both lay on the bed as they watched a movie. He couldn’t recall what movie it was- he really wasn’t paying attention to it. He was nervous. Should he kiss Jason? He was horny and he wanted to do something, but did Jason? Then he just said it, “Jason, can I jerk you off?” Mat looked up into his face and cracked a smile. To Mats surprise Jason grabbed him and the two of them immersed into a long passionate kiss. Jason let go and unbuttoned his tight jean pants. How his father didn’t know they were gay was beyond Mat. Jason was a little hottie. He was the same age as Mat. They were both seventeen at the time. He had long blond hair and a cute little face with a little nose and such kissable lips. He was muscular but not to much- just the right amount and this turned Mat on to an extreme. He was a little short but his legs were smooth and thin and as he pulled his pants down he revealed a large cock. It was a nine-inch cock and this kind of put Mat in awe because never actually seen somebody with a bigger cock then his. Mats cock was 8 ½- the ruler next to his bed…it has a purpose---.

Jason lubed up his cock with a little lotion on the side of the bed and Mat began to stroke it. Mats own cock was rock hard and he unbuttoned his pants to show Jason. He continued to stroked Jason and Mat remembered to this day as he whispered, “Oh- my God- this is so good.”

“God you are beautiful,” Mat had said in return and continued to stroke his dick.

“How about we have sex this way-” Jason said with a clever smile and a wink. Mat didn’t know what he meant. Jason Got up and pulled Mat’s pants all the way off. Mat just lay as wondered what was gona happen next. Jason went in for another kiss and then took off Mats shirt leaving him nude except for his undershirt. Jason was completely naked and lying on the floor and  Mat,  getting on his knees, grabbed hold of his own dick as he slowly struggled to find and slide into Jason’s butthole.

“You ready for this?” Jason asked.

“Ya- go for it!” Mat said with a sly smile.” Jason slowly inserted his cock into Mats butt as he watched Mats face change and he moaned as he went deeper in. Jason himself groaned with pleasure. This was Jasons first time, although, by the way he acted … you couldn’t telll.

“Can I cum in you,” Jason asked.

“YA,” Mat said.

Slowly Jason picked up speed as he banged harder and harder. The bed began to shake and Mat felt almost as if he were finally in those porno films he always wished to be in as he masturbated to them. Finally he was exactly that- a porno film in the making!

“O GOD this is great!” Mat said, “Harder!” and Jason banged him even harder. You could hear Jason’s dick and balls slap back and fourth against Mats butt and the groans and moans of the two in the mists of sex and nearing an orgasm.

“O God I’m cumming Jason screamed!” It didn’t take neither of them long to get off. I guess that wasn’t surprising. They were young, and it was their first time with each other..

“I’m cumming too!” Matt yelled as he began to squirt cum all over his chest and onto his under shirt. Jason just moaned and collapsed his whole body on top of Mat as he slowly continued to Ram Mat for the last bits of pleasure of the orgasm.
(There was a knock on the door)
Mat shook his head as he exited his little daydream and refocused his attention on the computer. Lilblueboy was talking to him again and somebody was at the door.
“Honey I’m leaving you 20 dollars for tonight out on the kitchen table,” Mat’s mom yelled from outside his door.”
“Thanks mom,” Mat said and you could hear her footsteps fade away.

“When are you going to send me a picture of you? I sent you a picture of me. Its only fair that you now return the favor and send me your picture” Mat typed, and watched the screen as he waited for a response.

“You will have to see me in person,” he typed out slowly onto the screen.

Great,” Mat said out loud. “He’s probably a loser.” Then with a sigh, he typed, “Okay, I got to go, I need to get ready. I’m going to a gay club tonight. I’ll talk to you later.”

“Bye,” wrote lilblueboy.

Mat signed off the computer and walked into the bathroom began to get ready to go to the club.
~ ~ ~

He watched as guys passed him dancing across the floor. There was this one really cute guy in jeans and a tight gap shirt that Mat watched with a curious eye as he past by several times back and fourth between friends. His butt was so well defined by the pants and he just imagined himself… He tried not to go crazy over guys like this but he had a certain fascination with the figure of the male body, and such perfection drove him mad. He wanted it.

For several weeks Mat had been going to the bars hoping to strike a date, or at least find somebody of interest. He stood on the second floor and leaned on the railing as he looked for his eye candy. Suddenly there was a tap on his shoulder and turning around, he faced the beautiful boy with blond hair. He mustn’t be but 23 or so and he had such a cute face, Mat had to restrain himself from jumping on top of the guy.

“Hi the blond hair guy said,” In a deep solid sexy voice.

“Hey,” Mat said with a smile.

“Ya, well my name is Taylor, and I just noticed you- I thought you might wanta talk or dance or something.”

“Well sure, um… do you mind talking… I’m not much of a dancer. Ummm… anyways,  my name is Mat,” Mat said as he tried to talk calmly. He was going crazy on the inside.

“Your really cute,” Talyor said shaking his head.”

Mat nodded and then stuttered, “Thankyou, I- so are you,” and the two laughed.
“Come downstairs with my friends.” Taylor said and taking Mat by the hand he dragged him down the stairs and into a giant room where 4 guys sat on a couch talking.

“What you guys talking about.” Taylor asked as they came up.

“Okay Taylor!” Your turn!” One said. “We are doing questions. And the question is where is the craziest place you have ever masturbated?”

Taylor paused and then said, “When I was younger my brother and I got into an argument. We bet on who could shoot the cum the farthest from the roof of our house. I beat off on top of the house and shot mine a good couple of feet! One of the best orgasms I had. I think it made me gay.” A couple people laughed.

“Nice,” a couple of them said.

“Would of liked to see that,” Mat thought in his head.

Taylor turned to Mat and said, “So Mat, what about you? Where is the craziest place you have ever masturbated?

“I don’t really have a story,” Mat said in embarrassment.
“Sure you do!” Taylor said. “Come on Mat! We know you do! Tell us your best story!”

Mat thought a while and at last spoke. “Ok- well- it was about a year ago and I was in a car and there were two really two hot guys next two me. They got preoccupied with one another and one pulled down the others pants just enough to give him a blow job and I started getting horny ya- know.” Mat cleared his throat and continued. “So I stuck my hand under my shirt and began to jerk off and was about to get off when the guy noticed me but he wasn’t mad. He told me to turn towards him and I did so and ripping off my shirt he sucked off my dick and I was already about to cum so he ended up swallowing my cum and all. I don’t know if that is really a masturbation story- but it sure the hell was great!”
~ ~ ~
As the evening came to an end Mat pulled Taylor to the side and awkwardly asked him if he wanted to come home with him.

“Sure, ya that would be great,” Taylor said with a slight smile and as he turned his back toward Mat shook his head as if in victory.

“Lets actually get going now- the club is getting dead now,” Taylor said.
The two of them left and got in Mat’s little Firebird and he sped toward his apartment with a hot date and new promising future on the horizon. Mat was happy for once and life seemed all right. Rolling down his window he pulled out a cigarette and lit it.

“Well this is it,” Mat said as the two entered his apartment.

“Its nice,” Taylor said.

“So anyways, the other day I rented a couple movies and I thought we might watch one of those first.”

Taylor paused a moment and then said, “The moment I saw you enter that club all I wanted to do was rip off your clothes and suck that big cock of yours and I know I’m hot so I’m guessing you wouldn’t mind putting that nice cock of yours up my ass so how about we skip the movie and go straight to sex.”

Mat was completely taken back as he looked at him a little stuned- a dream come true- and reaching for his face they embraced in a long kiss.

“Yes, lets watch the movie afterwards,” Mat said.

Mat slipped off the gap shirt over his head.

“Shall we go to the bedroom?” Mat asked.

“Right here is fine,” Taylor said.

Mat unbuttoned his pants and slowly took them off as they revealed no underwear beneath and an already solid dick.

“Mines rock hard too,” Mat said, and he took off his own pants and began taking off his shirt.

“No leave on your shirt,” Taylor said.

“Why?” Mat asked.

“You look sexy,” Taylor said with a wink.

Taylor pushed mat to the ground and grabbing his cock began to suck it. He played with it as he rubbed it with his tongue and played with it. He rolled it over and over in his mouth and stroked it with his tongue as he inserted Mat’s dick in and out of his Mouth and at last placing it as far in his throat as it would go. Mat moaned as Taylor sucked him off and his penis turned bright red and throbbed with pleasure.

“Ok now. Fuck me,” Taylor said and he lay down on his back. This was a little new for Mat because Mat was usually the one getting fuck and so he held his cock tightly in one hand and with the other he lifted Taylor’s two legs and struggling he found his butt hole and slowly he began to push forward as he slowly slid it in. It went in easily, as it was lubed, from Taylor’s mouth and Mat began to pound slowly back and fourth. He never guessed that fucking somebody felt this good. He was always received it. He let out great moans as he went back and fourth and Taylor moaned as he said, “Harder” and so Mat pounded harder until his dick was slapping Mat’s ass and suddenly Taylor let out a yell of pleasure as he began to cum. Taylor was beating off but Mat was fucking him so well that the banging was causing him to have an orgasm and the cum started to squirt across Taylor’s chest as Mat too began to Cum and moaned in satisfaction.

The two lay on the floor for a while.

“That was good,” Taylor said.

“Yup, real good,” Mat said.

“And to think I was gona use an online dating service and meet

some online freak.” Mat roared.
“You mean Lilbluboy?” Taylor said?

“Why-um-how-yes-how did you- who- how did you know his name?”

Mat asked in confusion as he sat up and looked at Taylor in complete confusion.

“I am lilbluboy Taylor said with a wink.”

Author notes

I don't know how to keep indentions in the story so I had to hit enter after each paragraph. Sorry about that. Also this is a Gold winning paper.
Written October 9th, 2005

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Comments

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  • Haha sexy, it's like there are little details you put into this that made it more spectacular....can't explaine it...
    Just loved it... amazing job
    you impressed me
    ~Serenity


  • Just Venting
    June 21

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    ...hot. VERY hot. Also WAY over the line limit... sorry, but I can't justify putting this in the finalists. However... VERY hot. Wow.


  • HeavenonEarth
    May 22, 2006
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    Definitely up to the challenge of what the contest holder wanted and it was greatly detailed hon It's always a pleasure to read your work. A couple of typo's that you might want to polish since it's in a contest but besides that, it's great. Thank you for entering and all the best to you in the contest
    ~Joy


  • dutch2lips gold member
    May 12, 2006
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    This is a great piece indeed, very hot and im female and hetro but omg steaming!! well done indeed ... again a great write from your talented fingers


  • ChaoLuv
    April 5, 2006
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    Sexxxxxy

    That was fu*kin H.O.T! Doesn't matter if the contest is about gurls your probly gonna win. IM a girl but I can know great erotica when I read it!


  • March 28, 2006
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    I think you did a great job, but i thought we were writing about girls?


  • Whispered Devotions
    October 28, 2005
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    WOnderful job..I'm not into gay erotica.. I'm a straight girl and would still prefer to read about lesbians instead of 2 men, but you done a wonderful job at keeping this interesting. I was gonna stop reading once it got to anal sex but I just couldn't, because you drew me in and pulled me through so powerfully. I love the ending..that was excellent. No wonder you won in this contest.


  • AlyssaEngaged
    October 28, 2005
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    woot woot taylor was the online dude ! that was really exciting! i liked it alot..iv never read a gay erotica i always thought it would be a weee bit wierd but really it was just like a lezbian erotica! u did a fantasic job! good luck!!!


  • Srinivasan
    October 13, 2005
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    Good

    "he was remind of the painful fact that"

    Please correct the grammatical error in the line mentioned above.

    Though I'm not much interested in reading the gay stuff, this one had a neat narration with the intervening dialogues that give a dramatic touch to the piece.


  • They Call Me Fancy
    October 12, 2005
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    Hotness

    lol I'm a girl, but this was HOT! . I loved the twist, although I kind of predicted it once Mat and Taylor met... But even so, it was a wonderful story that kept me interested.... Good job.

    ♥ Fancy

  • sophonax
    October 11, 2005
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    Lol you're all set to win with this one, I didn't read it as that's not my thing but good luck, and well done for getting the courage to enter lol. At the time of writing this looks like you'll be getting gold for sure.


  • AngelicMistress gold member
    October 9, 2005
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    OUTSTANDING!!!!!

    This is very deep, descriptive and I am sure that many, men, and even women (young and old) have felt the need for moments as the ones depicted here... Great job!

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