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Boy Meets Girl - A Single Word Life

contemplation
infatuation
provocation
persuasion

affection
unification
copulation
creation

confession
parturition
consternation
tribulation

protection
maturation
socialisation
recapitulation

Author notes

This was actually just a silly experiment.
If you have no idea what it means, that's ok, I'm still deciding if I do
Written October 8th, 2005

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  • Makaskill
    April 15, 2008

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    This is actually a nice piece of art...Very creative...It kind of give the reader a chance to "fill in the missin' words"...You've done a great job in this piece...Thanks for sharing...Shalom


  • Rosemary Stroebel silver member
    November 23, 2006
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    Well done

    You have created a great poem by using only one word per line. To my amazement it has flow and purpose and with the help of a dictionary I can actually follow it from the beginning to the end of this relationship. Well done. Rosemary


  • JustxThexBeginning
    August 7, 2006
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    wow... this is the first that i've seen like this. i loved the words that you used. they all had a lot of meaning to them. thank you for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck.

    -apelia-


  • hypergrl
    May 8, 2006
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    I kind of liked thisn because it had a completelly new spin on it... I can't really critisize because it's your own style and I se nothing wrong with having one... soo... great write.

  • Travmo
    April 9, 2006
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    wow this went through the whole process of a relationshipe. Visually it is stunning to look at. the flower background mixed with the one words would be an amazing print to hang. You have a knack for selling your pieces past this site.


  • FinShui
    October 9, 2005
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    Well this was certainly something different, very enjoyable, but have to raise my eyebrows at copulation, all in all great read for me, excellent write for you


  • October 8, 2005
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    People love everything here. Nice try...

  • Lacyte
    October 8, 2005
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    :)

    LOL... whether I, or you, or anyone else understands or knows the meaning of this.... I simply love it!!! And if I said that yes, I do understand it, does it mean the men with the long-sleeved jackets and ties on the back are coming to fetch me soon? Wouldn't that be fun?!


  • Shakari
    October 8, 2005
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    I love the rhyme here...and the humor you tried to create within this piece. I think that you should make different stanzas for these words though...because some are so related to each other...and lead to the next word of phrases of relating words.

    Whatever floats your boat though! Keep up the great writing...many words...many meanings...all felt when a guy meets a girl and love is formed.

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