Why is it that you can really miss someone
When you never really had that someone.
Why is it when I think of something right,
It's always wrong.
Why is it when I hope for Love,
I find nothing but hate.
Why is it I want something so real,
And only get lies.
Why is it that when I try to be visible,
All you see is blank space.
Why is it that whenever I try to get back up,
You only push me back down.
Why is it that I miss you so much,
But yet I never really had you.
Why is it that every time I am happy,
You fill me with sadness.
And Why is it that every time I think of these things,
None of them seem to fit you.
Because None of these things are you.
Author notes
Why is it that when I try to be visible,
All you see is blank space.
Why is it that I miss you so much,
But yet I never really had you.
Written October 8th, 2005
A contest entry
- Free for all by panthers3211.
300 points, ended October 16, 2005, 8 entries
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So tragic to have a lover, friend, spouse like this. Seems time to trade up for a better model, so that you can feel all those things you can't with this one. Well writte, and expressed.
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This is such a sad and heartfelt write. Very emotional and I can relate to feeling that way myself before. I hope you have many bright and beautiful days ahead.
Blessings
Frog
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