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silent love

my silent love, whispers in your ear,
even tho you dont hear.
its still there,
you broke my heart beyond repair,
this silent love,
driving me to despair,
can i tell you,
would you even listen,
echos of this scream that no one hears,
silent deadly romance,
do you even care,
ill whisper forever,
till it comes out a shout,
can i be heard, ill never try harder,
wishing for the answer,
to this silent love,



this silent love, i feel the pain,
to hear my screams,
your ganna have to strain,
quitly broken,
shattered dreams,
as my blood runs out,
it softly gleams.

my feelings are worthless, they lead me astray,
i beleived you when you said we would all be ok,
you whispered silent love right in my ear,
broken so, my eyes begin to tear,
brake the silents,
whisper it again,
maybe this time youll know where to begin,
will i ever hear you pleading again,
give me your heart, i swear i wont break it,
dont listen to them baby i know we can make it,
they're jealous of our radiant perfection,
can you whipser the silent love one more time,



this silent love i hold within,
i would spill but idk where to begin,
so ill whisper in you hear,
silent love filled with fear.

Author notes

silent love slowly kills me...its the slowest type of suicide...im killing myself...
Written October 8th, 2005

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  • C0CKiTnPULLiT
    February 8, 2006
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    awesome

    awesome i love it

  • krimson30011
    October 14, 2005
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    hey beb, good write,
    it has been awhile,
    send me and email with your
    phone number, and I will call
    you again, LOL, but my last phone
    kinda broke,


    GREAT WORK WITH THIS PEICE


  • KillMeNow89
    October 8, 2005
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    Great write girl! Keep up the awesome work. I'm hear for you girl. Call me sometime. 290=7510.
    -Crystal