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Friends

A friend is a person by your side,
not someone that runs and hides,
they come to you if needed,
or even if not,
if your down they will cheer you up,
they talk,
they giggle,
they are your friend.

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i really hope you like this poem it does suck but it might be good to some other of yalls so comment whatever you wish.
Written October 8th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • muzikluver420
    July 19, 2008
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    :)

    much to say of friends, all of which being true.


  • LadyAmalthea
    June 18, 2006
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    Cute I liked it. teehee, I totally forgot you had an account on here, I wondered a while ago and I was like, "nahh, she gave up a long time ago." But NO not true you are still poetry-ing along. nice.

    o.0


  • January 18, 2006
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    aw this is so true.
    so simple, just exactly what a friend is.
    such a pretty poem about friendship which doesnt over
    overdone. i liked it alot! great contest btw.


  • WildPunkChild
    November 27, 2005
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    very true!

    this is a cute poem. i like how its short. good job! you are a great writer! =o)

  • secret fountain
    October 9, 2005
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    thank you so much i really thought about this poem and i really like it.

  • secret fountain
    October 9, 2005
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    thank you so much it is muchly appreciated.


  • nichtmich silver member
    October 9, 2005
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    Extremely Nice

    Very nice indeed !!! I like the way the words flow and the thought itself Keep up the good work Malzy

  • Malzy
    October 8, 2005
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    So simple, yet so true, once again something Id look for in a card or something to give a friend.
    thank you for entering and good luck


  • your.guardian.angel
    October 8, 2005
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    Nice poem! Great descripition and nice flow of words. Wouldn't it be simply AWESOME if all freinds were like this? Of course it would. Well anyways excellent poem nice job. Best of luck and wishes in the contest!


  • Kissafrog
    October 8, 2005
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    Yes...that is totally what a true friend is. Nice poem and good luck in the contest.

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