A secret
Lying deep beneath the ice
A thick layer of deception
Shrouded in the beauty of crystal glass
I fear to walk that path
Should the ice break
Should I fall
The secret would be revealed
And I would be at it's mercy
A torrent of truth
An undercurrent of lies
I would be swept away
I would be lost
Even to myself
So I dare not tread over the ice
I simply watch as the glass cracks
Waiting for it to shatter
Patient for the cuts
Impatient for the understanding
That will surly follow
But still...
I watch
Gazing at my own reflection
Never knowing when
Or how
All this will end
But please
Let the world shatter soon
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Written January 26th, 2003
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It's like someone who is on their death bed and they know when they will die but they just have to wait because they can't bring themselves to do anything to stop it... :'( *sniffles* sad write! but ir eally enjoyed reading it
you have a way with words
*hugs*
liz -
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DIEEEEEEE!!!!!! lol Good one. -
excellent
very nice. shatter soon, hmmm??? beautiful poetry. you are very talented. blessings and lovestars!! -
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I like it too. It's different, but in a good way.=)
-Jey -
don't touch it!
Wow Bevin, I like this poem a lot! Not like your others, I enjoyed reading it. You need to post more of your work!!!
~Jenna
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