Run your fingers up my thigh
make me squirm and sigh
I want to feel your fingers inside.
Make me scream with ecstasy
show me what a man you can be.
I want to feel you deep inside me
pounding from behind me.
I will bounce and F**K you hard and long
till I make you cum so strong.
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Written January 26th, 2003
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this almost gave me an erection. and i'm drunk! a great achievment! great write, keep turning your feelings into words my friend. -wave x x x x
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LOL, then you may not want to read more of my erotoc pieces cuz thy will finish you off.
Hugs and bits, Vampy
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Maybe I'm just a romantic... but I like it--short and sweet and to the point... you are truly inspired and inspiring!
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wow, i know someone i would love to do that too omfg i am drooling over here right now, man, i wish that would come true for me.
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Eruptive
Your poetry never ceases to amaze me. Short, sweet and very yummy. -
OK this one is short yet hits the point dead on. Very steamy and hot. Good work.
**Ktulu Blackwolfe** -
Wow! This is great! Really sexy... now I must go see if all of you erotica is like this. ~~Shannon~~
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Oh WOW, hot and steamy, your erotica is great. I'm off to read some more of them.
~Babygirl~
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Another good write. Though short, it is very good and to the point. I need to read more of your writings sometime.
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mmmmm short and hot. I only wish it could go on a lot longer but I am a greedy sort that for some reason is never satisfied. I had to read this one a few time just to make sure it sinks in.
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Smile it's me!!!
More Please!!!! From StaceyandDoug
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yummy, I like it hard and long.
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This is better then a porno flick! I also loved the picture of the lady in the bed.
Jon
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oh yes woohoo great write love it..hehe thanx for the comments on my poems....
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I have not heard those words in a long time. LMAO. Told you to be careful!!!
Huggles!
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Jumpin G' hoseaphat, She's done loved me up and turned me into a hornytoad!!! Very good style here. I will have to say you stirred my emotions with this one. Thanx!
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Lots of steam in this one.
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High up (among other things)
Yeah now thats what I call poetry, if there was more like that the world would be a better place. All you gotta do is give me the word and I'll play in your dungeon anytime!!! -
Hehe, Yes yes.. More 'hottness.'
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great write
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Wow, I have to say that you certainly are the fearless one. I don't know that I would have that sort of fearless spirit to write like that, but props to you for doing so. That's really well done.
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my dreams will come true thanks to you and your great poem
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Damn Girl... You do know how to get a guy all hot and bothered... lol great white great read... Ohh sooo sexy
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Most Most Wanting More...
Short and oh so very sweet! But I must have more so on to the next!
Sincerely,
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I Love that! It totally showed hottness
lol or however you would put it... >.< Lol. Well done! 
:xXx:-Nirvana Girl-:xXx:
~Kati.
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i wonder how many times i've searched for those exact words. it's like "this is what i want you to do!" i should print this off and make it a checklist.
it's amazing how poetry will make you say, "i've always thought that!" this poem did. i was like seeing my thoughts onscreen.
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YIKES!! Lady Raven. I so enjoy these from you. They make me blush and I'm glad I've got no stopped up arteries. LOL! If I did you'd easily flush them out for me.
I don't know that you needed the *X* in the "F" word, afterall, anyone reading erotica will hopefully not mind one or two graphic words. LOL! But once again I enjoyed it. Thanks.
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wow...ur a great poet...
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damn. I like it
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Mmmmmm.........Mmmmmm...........Mmmmmmm
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I had to add this one to my favs list makes me want to take a shower a cold dark shower loved it
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excellent
LOL! well what can i say except hope you don't break it. And i don't think that shows what a man he can be at all maybe what a animal, but it takes more than that to be a man. Oh but this makes me laugh. GREAT JOB!
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