Life is but dreams within dreams
Every waking moment jointed by the seams
But you are no mere illusion
In my life of apathetic seclusion
I feel a specter of passion conceal me
I cannot recover, I cannot disagree
And I choose not to fight, but to feel
Your luminous touch that shoals me with zeal
And I shall drop my guard and let you take me
I will force destiny and the Gods to let us be
For I would rather us be forever still in stone
Than for us, Dark and Light, to forever be alone
Author notes
Bleeehhh... I should call this the crap poem [Yeah Yuan, this is suckier than your works. 
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Written October 7th, 2005
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Thank you VERY much for your support regarding my Sudanese Essay, it was much appreciated. Sorry it took me so long to return the favor but I got around to it as I promised lolx. Regarding this piece, this is definitely not sucky man, i mean its one of the more finer poems here on AP...I loved the flow here and the flow was nice, lovely write...keep writing...
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Nicely done.
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Ohhh I dont think this is crap at all! I really enjoyed reading this, unlike many works of people on AP .
Yet again, my favorite writer has amazed me.
Brilliant!
much love,
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Hey, its not that bad. if you had called it the Crap Poem, I problay would have laughed and the irony.
Nice write
Good luck in the contest
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