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happy days

happy days have gone too fast
are there any more?
depressing moments seem to last
far longer than they should.

boys and girls who think that they
know what it's all about.
birds and bees who do what they
see as right or wrong

playground games and teasing-gangs
that make a child a youth.
first-time events and silly accidents
that change our lives forever.

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I haven't written in such a long time, this one i wrote just to write.
Written October 7th, 2005

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  • Thomas Vaughan
    December 12, 2006
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    how many times I have felt this way. "silly accidents" I have more than i care to remember......


  • gentleman jove
    October 27, 2005
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    Well, to just have written it for the sake of writing, it's fairly good. . .weren't the happiest days when you were little and you only worried about mis-matching socks and which colour of sucker you wanted? ah, yes. . but, we have fun don't we? we're still happy. .