Why should i...live on,while some die- i cry but i guess it's just survival of the fit,or more fit? forced to ponder as i sit....in thinking chair, amassing my despair,life's no bed of roses, it's an UN- fair- world...we live in; amidst denial, so afraid to give in though realising much later; that we play a part in something much greater... than life itself, which reshelves-the plot :why should we dwell in a life that is not being lived? merely puppets on a string, dancing to the rhythm,of the puppet-master's beat providing entertainment just to satisfy the mete...of the matter...gathering moss as we roll, forced to stare as the plot unfolds -to us- much too late to justify distrust...because the rhythm is gone- but the beat goes......................on!
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this poem was written during my \
Written October 7th, 2003
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thanks for the love,i can never stop writing coz there r always thoughts in my head...deep thoughts!
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Wow...WOw...WOW FUCKING WOW!!! I LOVE THIS!! I love your structure and the flow. It speaks so much truth and leaves the reader to ponder. I love it!!

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