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Why should i...live on,while some die-                                        i cry                          but i guess it's just survival of the fit,or more fit?   forced to ponder as i sit....in thinking chair,                                                                         amassing my despair,life's no bed of roses,                          it's an UN- fair- world...we live in; amidst denial,                                      so afraid to give in                                                                  though realising much later;                                          that we play a part in something much greater...                       than life itself,                                                     which reshelves-the plot :why should we dwell in a life that is not being lived?                                        merely puppets on a string, dancing to the rhythm,of the puppet-master's beat                                                                 providing entertainment just to satisfy the mete...of the matter...gathering moss as we roll,                                 forced to stare as the plot unfolds            -to us-                    much too late to justify distrust...because the rhythm is gone-        but the beat goes......................on!

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this poem was written during my \
Written October 7th, 2003

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  • da poeticist
    October 12, 2005
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    thanks for the love,i can never stop writing coz there r always thoughts in my head...deep thoughts!


  • darkvixenpoet
    October 7, 2005
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    Wow...WOw...WOW FUCKING WOW!!! I LOVE THIS!! I love your structure and the flow. It speaks so much truth and leaves the reader to ponder. I love it!!