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to you

to you, the girl with everything.
what is there for a normal guy,
a person with the average life,
the average car,
the average looks.

what is there for me,
a student with no money,
an addiction,
and a hidden demeanor
to give you, the girl with it all.

you walk through the doors, and eyes turn.
heads follow your confident walk,
the flick of your shiny hair,
as you take your seat next to the older,
more attractive,
and by all means, richer, upperclassman.

but then, i remember.
a day what seems years ago,
looking through your eyes,
a gentle kiss, that lifted my thoughts.

since then, from that day,
you showed me that i don't always need to have it all.
because for that brief moment,
i did.

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for my toga party girl.
Written October 7th, 2005

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  • Crimson Rose
    November 11, 2005
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    good good good

    AWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! BOO-FUCKIN-HOO-HOO YOU GONE SOFT YOU SHIT-FACED WEED SMOKIN FAST DRIVIN MULTIPLE GIRL SCREWIN SON OF A CUM GUZZLING BIOTCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! naw....good poem, love you man, hit me back....peace!

  • twiny21787
    October 13, 2005
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    wow. good write. just thought i would comment on something that you finally posted. hope to see you soon
    much love


  • Swadhi
    October 11, 2005
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    Aw this is really really amazing and emotion-filled. Beautiful yet sad. I love it!

  • soccershorty21
    October 8, 2005
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    I take it you're enjoying college... heee heee, well I'll leave you to it, I miss ya though.