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Waterfalls / Acrostic

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Running rivers that have natural waterfalls
Always create the most beautiful rainbow
Images I see of the splendid beauty before me.
Never do I cease to be in awe of the
Beauty I see before my eyes, to run my hands
Over the variety of brilliant colors the
Water creates is a wondrous gift of nature
Scenes of such loveliness leave me in complete awe.

Author notes

I didn't know Del personally, only through friends who have spoken very highly of him of what a wonderful man he was/is.
Written October 7th, 2005

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  • poetryality silver member
    October 16, 2005
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    Very lovely indeed, as a matter of fact the poem is soothing. I can easily see the colors of the rainbow in the waterfall. Spectacular! Thank you so much for the time spent to enter this challenge.

    Much Love,
    Renee


  • mypassion
    October 16, 2005
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    I really like this Jen Great creativity and imagination. God bless Brenda


  • iamfromabove
    October 9, 2005
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    This is a beautiful acrostic Jen. I really like how you have combined a waterfall with a rainbow.
    beautiful
    Mia


  • Hinemoa silver member
    October 9, 2005
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    This is a lovely Acrostic Jenn. Waterfalls are beautiful arn't they? I love to visit them and see the colours they omit.

    Love Sally


  • cayleyxox
    October 8, 2005
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    this is beautiful.. good luck in the contest im sure you will do really good


  • jenelda silver member
    October 8, 2005
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    Well then Yem, Mariza would know what I'm talking about, simply magnificent. Thank you for the wonderful comment Yem

    Jen


  • Yemassee gold member
    October 7, 2005
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    Mariza oncewrite about a rainbow in a waterfalls, and now since you have I'm really intrigued to see what all the hubbub is about. I doubt I'll ever get a chance to see such an occurrence but I can read your poem and imagine it.

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