The smile
lingers a while
after they leave with new
misconceptions of who she is,
or was...
The smile
lingers a while
after they leave with new
misconceptions of who she is,
or was...
Author notes
Possibly a Psycologist, psychiatrist or perhaps even an Osteopath 
Written October 7th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- User Names by knots untangled.
300 points, ended October 13, 2005, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Thanks Jen, I think it is what one might call a "Warped" sense of humour
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Many thanks for your kindness, it is appreciated
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We each have our secrets... I am delighted you delved behind the cinquain and found a mystery
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Thank you
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What an amazing write! Increibly unique and this incredibly written piece makes one think. Bravo! You did an awesome job on this write. Bravo! Its... astounding!
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Interesting, unique...hmmm, what other words can describe this piece?! I am a big cinquain fan....and I love haikus...though I have only written 3...but haikus seem overused. I mean, cinquains seem to be known of by less. The rarity must attract me to such writing. Hmmm, we you did an awesome job on this piece. In fact...I think that many can relate to this piece...it is the meaning that you have set behind it that not all can relate to.
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This is done ine perfect cinquain form, which happens to be a favorite of mine. I really like the levity that you used with this piece. Excellent job! Best of luck to you in the contest!
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I do so love your little spins of mind bending thoughts....you always give me a smile and a laugh, great medicine to pick up ones spirits....thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest .
Jen
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Thank you Di I am fine and raring to go Nice to see you also
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Hi you never cease to amaze me, great write, I loved it, how are you?, it's so good to see you back and in great form, super write all the best my friend you have my applause, hugs Di
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Many thanks Your comments are greatly appreciated
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Thank you Sam Glad you enjoyed it
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Thank you Bella, I have a wicked sense of humour..Sorry I distracted you
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Good job on your poem, very unique write and entry for this contest. Best of luck now and always! The only thing I had a tiny bit of a problem with was the as it was a tad distracting as I read. But I understand the reasonging behind your useage in this particular piece. Its affect was well noted!
Bella ~* -
The last half made me smile, and the 'sound' of the poem was very appealing, sort of likened it my mind to a clearly ringing bell. Superb little piece. Thank-you.
Sam. x -
creative cinquain....enjoyable to read. good luck in the contest
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Thank you
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unique entry to my contest, i love seeing origionality
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