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Love

Lust at first sight
I felt your love
Bite

I felt your fingers on my skin
Its getting so deep
I'm afraid I'll fall in
Love

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Written October 7th, 2005

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  • tmullins
    October 10, 2005
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    this is short and sweet. good job. you seem to get your point across with very few words. good start here. welcome. hope you like it!


  • FifthDove
    October 7, 2005
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    We can fight it all we want, but when love is right, it will conquer us in the end and we will fall all over ourselves for that love. Dangling on the end of a line (so to speak) This is a well expressed poem with good imagery. Thank you for sharing your words with all of us here I would like to take this opportunity to welcome you to Ap. If I can ever be of any assistance please do not hesitate to send me any greeter an IM. Nice to read you ♥FifthD♥ve♥