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NAVY Defenders of U.S.A.

N avigate the seven seas.

A bled bodied seaman.

V essaled  defenders

Y oung in spirit,old in tradition.

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Read Sandygram's (Charles The Submariner).I can not agree with the current reasons for the war.I know now,we've been lied to and mislead.My family is and always will be Navy.
Written October 7th, 2005

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  • free-samples
    October 12, 2005
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    Rock on! I will be in the Navy after I go to college, and I love to see such support of our troops! This gets a clapper guy!
    ~Dylan~


  • TaintedDarkness
    October 8, 2005
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    awesome!!! yeah i agree with you on your opinion on the war. we have been lied to and mislead, but it happens everywhere. i love this poem because i just joined the Navy!!! its so awesome! everyone around me where i live disapproves because the city where i live is known for air force because its where the air force academy is. well thanks for taking the time to enter and good luck!

    Emily


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    October 7, 2005
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    A wonderful acrostic suseann. I know how very sincere you are too which just makes this that much better. Well done.

    ~Lyrical


  • Sherry gold member
    October 7, 2005
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    Suseann,
    They are very brave and unselfish to serve our country
    to young to die but what heros they are to protect us.
    Wars not pretty and I don't like it but these men are out
    there trying to protect help and serve. I don't have the
    answers for this world....Only wish everyone could love more
    hate less living in the light asd the darkness disminish.
    Sherry
    Edited on Oct 07, 1:19 p.m. because ''.