Life can be sweet,easy,cruel as it wants to be.
Life is a journey you create a path never ending feeling.
a trail of tearsm journey of laughter,ups,downs.
Heaven crys as some ones love dies.
I sit in a valley of memories baring my emotions
i so long want to hide.
Day turns to night in this valley of emotions,
in this world i lay on my back gazing at the stars above, thinking of how beautiful love is.
such a beauty to behold but when emotions gets tangled all i can do is throw it into that night sky
an let the heavens help me as a guide for a solution.
As the sun rises within a valley of mist baring my the love
i once had.
My journey is learning how to make it through love an life my survival in this world of love is now lost until i find again.
Dawn in the valleys misty feelings have arose in the humor of being real.The realm of true beauty can be found within myself. my love,life,goals,inspiration,passion,an whole world lies within you.
The world seems to be a cruel an unfair place to be but in your arms im as safe and free as i want to be.
You're my pride,harmony,soul.I will forever be secure in you.
Baby lets stand strong no more worries,tears,fears.
Lets show the world who we really are an who we can be.
That no one can bring us down an that well be around a while.
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Written January 25th, 2003
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penny we been friends for a good while thanks for your thought on my poems sorry it took so long to reply
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dont touch it
I love this poem as much as i love the rest. It touched my heart and it made me relize a few thing. Thanks to poets like u. You say stuff for us that we cant really say. ~ Penny ~ -
meaningful emotions to me
To all those poets to see my poems forgive the way they are typed they are written that way for a reason i try to make them not long but as unique or different as i can if they seem long im sorry i just tend to sore off but thank you to all those poets who are loving what i did and ill be sure to put more in, in the future sincerely silver love -
don't touch it!
Lots of great images created here and good word usage, but again it is hard to follow. I can see this broken into a couple or even three different poems. I still love the messages and emotions you are conveying either way. Keep writing.
~Kathy -
excellent
Very beautiful, but still seems like too much to bite off at once. Maybe its just me, but I have a hard time processing an entire paragraph. Loved it anyway!
Mike -
don't touch it!
Your imagery is so vivid and amazing. This is my favorite of yours so far...not that the other was less exquisette, just my personal opinion. You are going into my favorites with this one. Your poetry style is way beyond your years, i am envious. Can not wait to read more. ~Amy~ -
don't touch it!
omg just as good as the first
let me say you have a way with words
this has struck my heart and filled it up and helped me realize alot of the good things that area out there and in here instead of concentrating on the bad things
a lot of the time it's hard to see the good things when the bad things stand out so much more and seem to happen so much more often
plz keep writign this is beautiful work
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