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Heaven Awaits

Last night I had a wondrous dream
The angels escorted me
To a place of marvellous grandeur
As far as the eye could see.

The skies were blue and crystal clear
The silence so profound
Then I heard the shirring of their wings
As the angels gathered around.

Gods' voice spoke as roaring thunder
Through the Heavens it did ring
Their voices raised in melodic tones
As the angels began to sing.

The sound came forth from every portal
Like none I'd heard before
I felt the Heavens begin to shake
I caught a glimpse of Heavens' shore.

The beauty I saw was beyond compare
My eyes could not behold
My mind just could not fathom
The riches so untold.

And then Gods' voice rang out again
This time He said to me
All of this, and so much more, my friend,
Can be yours, you see.

I've a mansion prepared, awaiting you
Your names above the door
Someday soon I'll welcome you home
To live on Heavens' shore.

Author notes

This will surely be a wonderful time.  God bless.
Written October 7th, 2005

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  • darlee77 gold member
    February 7, 2006
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    I don't believe the time is far off. Thank you very much for reading and commenting. Darlee77

  • fair-ashley
    February 6, 2006
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    this will happen one day sooner than any of us think! the signs of the time are truly appearing everywhere. it won't be much loner!


  • darlee77 gold member
    February 2, 2006
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    Thank you very much for the wonderful comments. I will read some of yours soon. Darlee77


  • darlee77 gold member
    February 2, 2006
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    Thank you very much for the great review. I will read and review for you soon. Darlee77


  • Pretty Hate Machine
    January 22, 2006
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    Well Done

    Beautifully done as always, D. Love ya.


  • darlee77 gold member
    October 17, 2005
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    Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem. I am glad you liked it. Darlee77


  • darlee77 gold member
    October 17, 2005
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    Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed this. Darlee77


  • darlee77 gold member
    October 17, 2005
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    Thank you for the great review. I am so glad you liked it. Darlee77

  • Sweetnessnstarlight
    October 14, 2005
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    Great poem! I enjoyed reading this, it put a smile on my face. Thank you! God Bless.

  • Friends
    October 8, 2005
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    I also like to pay you a visit and I enjoy your work very much. Thankyou for sharing about heaven again, one of my many favourite subjects and plus I like your style of poetry. Well Done!

  • Poet-treeman
    October 7, 2005
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    this is very good work. It is apparent that you have a talent for this. Keep up the good work and God bless you.

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