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The Sniffles

I am feeling rather snuffly,
Really not quite right,
My head is kind of muzzy,
And my chest extremely tight.
Everything sounds muffled,
Like there's water in my ears,
To look at me you'd surely think,
That I had aged ten years.
My little nose is oh so sore,
And really very red,
I think I must admit defeat,
And put myself to my bed.

Author notes

you will understand why I may not be around for a day or to......ATCHOOOOO!
Written October 7th, 2005

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  • Yusefeligirl
    October 12, 2005
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    I just read miffed so I know you're back in fighting form


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    October 12, 2005
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    Awww. I hope you get rid of those sniffles really soon. ITs that time of year. I liked this so much, mostly because it is so real life.
    Delightful to read. ~Pam


  • Lucian Valcor
    October 12, 2005
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    I feel you on this one, I have been sick latley my self too and just have not been feeling my self


  • Smirnoff Ice
    October 10, 2005
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    Good poem.Rhymes and flows well


  • DeepDarkDesire
    October 7, 2005
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    yeas i agree with one of the comments above, this is cute. ive just recently had a virul infection in my inner ear(as so every year-which suck panda!) so i can totally relate to this, you should enter this into a contest, you'd win something, FOR SURE! i look forward to reading some of your comments soon HINT HINT-Hol


  • Congruence
    October 7, 2005
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    Hopefully you arenot going too ie on us! Seriously, a very good piece.

    Ten whole years might work better than just ten years, very well written,hope you feel better soon!

    James
    xx

  • nice tush
    October 7, 2005
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    great poem, really enjoyed it, i hate the flu, check out my poem about it! great read well done!!


  • Legend silver member
    October 7, 2005
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    Nice to see you can look at this little set back with humour Rudolf. A great little poem enjoyed reading it Get well


  • Barb Davidson silver member
    October 7, 2005
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    Oh dear poor you.. hope it's not the chicken flu! A red beak and feathers would be just too much

    Hope you get better soon..

    Barb

    Psst Poem is a nice fun read though


  • Sherry gold member
    October 7, 2005
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    Cute little poem you sound miserable lol go back to bed
    I'm sorry you are feeling bad and hope you get well soon.
    Sends you some bird feathered soup to help you get well
    You have tried it haven't you? Look it up in ya recipies.
    Oh you really wondered there? LOL No such thing Margaret
    roflol I do send chicken soup ya way and orange juice.
    Love, Me ♥

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