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Twisted Sister

Twisted sister
Want to come play?

So many minds
To play with
Opening then to the unknown

Twisted sister
Want to come play?

So many town toys
To bring down
Onto the unexpected

Twisted sister
Want to come play?

So many voices to silence
With their screams of joy
Bringing happiness into this insanity

Twisted sister
Want to come play?

So much fun you are
Turning these games of life and desire
Into love and death

Twisted sister
Want to come play?

For these demons get bored and lonely
And crave new meat
For their fun

Twisted sister
Want to come play?

Darkness prevails
My yearning to continue
With this insanity

Twisted sister
Want to come play?
There’s not much else to be said
At this level of fun
For you will see

Twisted sister
Want to come play?

The end is near
You must take over
And end their suffering

Twisted sister
Want to come play?

Author notes


Written October 7th, 2005

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  • Your-fool
    October 7, 2005
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    i really like the repetitiion...so dark and freaky my favorite part was:

    Darkness prevails
    My yearning to continue
    With this insanity

    i love the first line especially great job


  • DeadBeauty
    October 7, 2005
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    I like this. I like how it has a flowing theme