On the Day God blessed me with You
I was so happy I didn't know what to do
My precious little angel of Heavenly bliss
You were so perfect, not one thing did he miss
As I watched you grow from a tot to a young lady
I would smile and say "You are still my baby"
I never knew that God would take you away from me
leaving my world consumed in such misery
On the day he took you away, All I did was cry
Asking God "Why did my baby have to die"
You had so much more living to do
And I will forever deeply miss you
My Baby is now an Angel living up above
I know she's safe, cause I can feel her love!
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Written October 6th, 2005
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This is a very beautiful and heartbreaking poem. You have touched lightly on the saddness that she feels. Very well and tenderly done.
Criss -
Very well spoken!
Yes, we are all a poetic family and because we are a family in poetry, we should keep each other in pray as we would our own famililes. I found this write to be genuinely sincere, thoughtful and touching.
Avril
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This is a beautiful write that shows the love of mother and child very well. Touching. Thank you for such a wonderful entry. Best of luck.
Blessed be
~~Serenity~~
Billie Jean -
I wrote this poem as if I had lost my child and I hope it fits this contest, I will keep the family in prayer as should everyone in this poetic Family. May God forever bless and protect this family in their time of loss!
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