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Wish I Was Dead

I was living alone in a fantasy world
Where you were my prince and I was your girl
It was an idiotic dream. you and me.
My happy place was torn apart
You cut my soul to pieces and ripped out my heart
I was stupid to think it would last. that my future would not be my past.
Now I'm thinking and I question. Is this life or is it my lesson?
I dont know what to think so I'm asking why?
Why are you so addictive like a drug?
Why do you want to tear me down to shreds?
Why are you so into hating me
You make me wish I was dead.
Too many bridges burned
Not enough trust was earned
I dont know what I saw in you. But I knew.
I would live to see tomorrow
I'd make it through the pain and sorrow
I dont know why I didn't just die. Maybe then you'd notice me.
Now I'm thinking and I question. Is this life or is it my lesson?
I dont know what to think so I'm asking why?
Why are you so addictive like a drug?
Why do you want to tear me down to shreds?
Why are you so into hating me
You make me wish I was dead.

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Written October 6th, 2005

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  • insane1
    March 18, 2006
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    hi! u probably dont remeber me at all...cuz i havent logged in since august till now...so yea...
    but this was an amazingly beautiful poem...i think all too many of us know all to well how u feel...luv sux ass...therez not gettin around that...guyz suck ass...life sux ass
    i hear ya sister -sigh-
    i hear ya all 2 well
    good poem nd good luck w/...life...nd gettin through it
    ~sarah~


  • Already Gone
    October 10, 2005
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    wow, awesome job tracey. this is an awesome poem. you did a great job. keep writing!

    <3 always,
    megan