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Live Your Dream

cloaked in disguises
we pretend for just one night
to be someone else

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I read "Halloween" by Kendhal22

And I feel it is very obvious....but if not, this poem is about Halloween-one of my favorite holidays.
Written October 6th, 2005

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  • AJ Morelli gold member
    October 21, 2005
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    Nice. -Al


  • FifthDove
    October 8, 2005
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    This ku is a little profound and truthful to say the least. It has made me stop and think! Why do we do it? Hmmm, for me I suppose it is for the fun and camaraderie that naturally comes along with the holiday. Being superman or whatever even for just a few hours is a great escape from the routine humdrum lives we all have from time to time. Hey I want to dress up as a millionaire this year!!! I enjoyed the ku* * Thank you very much for writing-for and entering this contest and for following all the rules. Best wishes Cotton

  • Belle
    October 7, 2005
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    You and me both!! LOL Thanks.

    ~Brandi~


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    October 7, 2005
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    great write..hope your wishes and dreams come true..lol Linda


  • cherche -d -ame
    October 7, 2005
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    aaah , the fun of pretending ....even if just for one night best wishes in this contest,
    Reenie


  • nichtmich silver member
    October 6, 2005
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    Very, Very Good

    I love it very descriptive of my favorite pastime, too bad it is only on Halloween


  • Mephitic ID Synergy gold member
    October 6, 2005
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    Lol! The question in my mind is do we really confine the pretending to just one night of the year?! This could be ironic... Well in any case, it is a dream for some! Halloween is probably my favorite holiday. Finding the right costume is a blast.

    Mike

  • Billbard silver member
    October 6, 2005
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    Nice Halloween word picture

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