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Sweet All Star (Ana)AP Daughter

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Sweet AP daughter to me
Writes fantastic poetry
Enjoys writing about everything
Excited to hear Nirvana sing  
Talks to guys, always listens

Amazing red hair that glistens
Lovely eyes piercing with blue
Loves the music of the Pixies too

Surfing is a love in her heart
Tall and graceful stands apart  
Ana emits beauty, never hates
Red Hot Chilli Peppers really rates




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Written October 6th, 2005

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  • Ray Von
    October 25, 2005
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    Aww, this is so nice!!!! Good work, I love how at the end of every verse you put who she likes(what types of musci, her fave bands)
    Maria


  • all star
    October 17, 2005
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    brilliant!!

    omg mom this is so good im so chuffed!!!thank you soo much!!
    lots of love
    and
    god bless
    anaxx
    Edited on Oct 17, 2:16 p.m. because ''.


  • Sandygram silver member
    October 6, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    We are all stars AP mom and dad
    She makes us happy she makes us glad
    We share an interest to help her grow
    She is a fine young lady we've come to know

    Thank you shubs for the wonderful comment. She is so lucky to have a wonderful AP dad such as you. It is an honor and a pleasure to share her with you. God Bless you. Sandy


  • Sandygram silver member
    October 6, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you so much Melanie. So nice to hear from you. Hope all is well with you and your family and your AP family. Always a pleasure to hear from my friend. Take care and God Bless you always. Sandy


  • luckynsincere
    October 6, 2005
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    You always have such wonderful tributes to your friends and family. How blessed they must all feel. This is lovely Sandy as is the petress that penned it!
    Always,
    Melanie


  • shubs
    October 6, 2005
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    A happy family mom...this ones as sweet as Ana and the tribute is an attribute to the cute...sweet treatise by a sweeter poet for the sweetest daughter==Shubs

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