Empty bottles of coca cola
smile at me
and I know you've had your fill
of empty glasses
Burnt out cigarettes
smoke in ash trays filled
with the memories of better days
On the empty couch
lies the promise of
another time with you
The open door
to the open world,
where everything cruel happens,
stands between me
and reality
Maybe,
if I fall asleep and dream
one more time,
you will come back to me...
Author notes
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green day rox my sox.
Written October 6th, 2005
A contest entry
- Second Contest, 5 Choices! by DarkTear.
300 points, ended January 14, 2006, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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haha o my god i didn't even comment your poem yet i gave you a trophy :-)).... Yeah it's beatufil, whatever :-P I'm really hyper!!!!! Can't you tell?? YEah!!!! haha i hope you go skiing tomorrow.... if i don't i think i'll die. yeah okay im done now. call me!
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very nice write i loved it.. true..so true.. i look at things and see myself there when i was happy, wow inspiring poem i like it
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oh my gosh.. i like this so much.. like you wouldn't believe, so many times have i thought that about one of my past realationships, (it hasnt happened) but still this really hit it at home, and i truely love it!
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