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Smashin

Yo check it
got me sittin n my room suckin in a fume
ya wanna win..suck it in
these people make me seeth
 now breath

n out...now turn about

hold on a sec..yo my lifes a wreck
I aint d one holdin d deck
he's got me stranglin at d neck

Im holdin Mary Jane by d chain
yo I know dis game..its got me breathin flame
its here and here I came....

what bout dem snowballs
yea here ya go to hit some walls
here ya go to some heavy falls

-----that is d story..I heard from my homie Roy
yo check it
heres what I gotta say.. dat aint d only way
man ya know who ya messin wit
hope someday you'll see
it aint me
but its you tryin to fit
yo I know you'v takin a hit
an ur angers been light

but man do urself a favor
take life an savor

u aint just hurtin urself
or killin ur own health

ur killin me man

each time I see ya down
it throws me to d groun
take a moment n here dis soun
maybe den u'll b foun

Author notes

yo..yeah aight I admit I'm white..an I'm a girl to but hey no one said I can't try..hope you readers know how to rap cause it ya don't dis aint gonna sound to good.
~D

Written October 5th, 2005

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  • -throw it up
    October 6, 2005
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    lol, i like this a lot.... it's effin awesome!


  • Epos Tristis
    October 5, 2005
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    wow-the ghetto side of destiny has come out. let me give you a proper welcome... yo-yo-yo homeslice. whur u been slutface? anyways enough of the ghetto stuff. good poem/song

  • Infractus
    October 5, 2005
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    Good sutff, need to hear da beat though I can't get into it. Peace out Homie