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Just some feelings

This is just me wrinting how I feel about everything. Its not really a poem or a story or anything.
Just repeating the same thing over and over again in different words



Smiles of day
Cuts by night
Laughter in the morning
Death is just this "thing"

This "thing" that haunts me in my sleep,
Hurts me til I bleed,
and forces me to cry.

None of this bunny rymes
It doesnt make sense either
I feel like bullbunny

I wish I could die

But thanks to you my dear
I am able to stay alive
For if you where to leave me,
Everything would stop

For if you were to leave me,
life itself would end

For if you where to leave me,
I would die.

I said the same thing over and over again!
SCREW LIFE
SCREW MY THOUGHTS

If it where ten years ago,
I owuld kill myself then!

No life to live
No dreams to fail

No people to hurt or to hurt me

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Written October 5th, 2005

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  • ImUrFadingMemory
    June 8, 2006
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    AWWWWW! THIS MADE ME SOOO SADDDDDDD!!!!! im so glad you dont hurt yourself anymore cuz den if u did I'd just have to hurt you NO

    you best not be!
    Edited on Jun 08, 1:01 because ''.