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Lifes like this

Judge me
Hurt me
Fill me up with ies

Love me
Kiss me
Take me by surpise

Hit me
Slap me
Abuse me til I die

Think of me
Plead for me
Don't let me hide my pride

Author notes

This is just some stupid stuff I felt like writing!
Written October 5th, 2005

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  • XalwaysXforgottenX
    October 5, 2005
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    awsome


  • lostemotions
    October 5, 2005
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    wow, I really like this..It like expresses how i feel right now and what i am thinking! Its really great! You make it so easy to understand what you are talkng about!