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White

In the fiery depths of your arms,
I rest in ashes;
Pieces of a broken heart.
I wallow in the shadows
Of a falling white snow.
I welcome the warmth of slumber—
Frigid breath upon my lips;
In blood like wine,
I drown in your gaze;
Blinded by the white in your eyes

Author notes

Just a poem that doesn't happen to make any sense at all.
Written October 5th, 2005

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  • RevoltedHorror
    October 5, 2005
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    Thanks. I appreciate it

  • OurxBeginning
    October 5, 2005
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    This is amazing, I love the emotions in this, very strong. Wonderful job, I hope to read more, keep it up.