i wanted to write something
so you'd know i feel all those wonderful things you do, too.
my tongue gets tied and my words are twisted
you make me blush too easily,
but that's alright.
paintings and poems and gold chains
no value in cash but in soul alone.
i wish i could make some grand gorgeous gesture
that would show you how much i care
unconditionally, for the first time,
but i just don't know
is that alright?
because you knew me
when my guard was down, i cant believe
you actually thought of me
as something special.
it sweeps me off my feet.
1 + 1 = 1
you know?
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Written October 5th, 2005
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WELL DONE
Yes. This is what I mean. keep it real. It says so much more.
Just remember to look into your heart for all your answers. Your word will just come out as they should that way.
Just do NOT give negatives. Don't tell him you don't know, becuase in your heart you DO know.
If you are trying to find a certain thing to say, Stop imagine yourself with everything in the world you want and all the money you could ever wish for. Then say to yourself. OK. Now I have all this what would I do with it?
(i wish i could make some grand gorgeous gesture
that would show you how much i care
unconditionally, for the first time,
but i just don't know)
Yes you do know. You just need to craw it out in the open and give it to him. You can do anything.!!!
Do you get what I mean.
Well Done with this poem it is beautiful and I am sure he loved it very much.
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Jan -
oh oh oh oh ohhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW I GET THE POEMS SINCE YOU INFORMED ME ON WHAT IS GOING ON!!!! way to leave me in the dark! lol, you're so adorable Clara! I'm sooooo happy for you! This is a fantastic poem! I need to write more, I haven't written for QUITE A WHILE!!! my goal is to write a poem or two over MEA... but.. uhh... I think that's all about now.. this is such a great poem! Don't you love it when you fall in love when you are least expecting it and almost not wanting it... it's one of the most incredible feelings EVER!!! anywho, I hope it all goes well! take care babe! love ya!
~Lezli -
Very loving poem. The line 1+1=1 is delightful. Nice to show someone how much you love and appreciate them. I know how you feel when you try to tell someone how you feel but aren't sure how to go about it. Thanks for sharing. Be Well and Be Blessed
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Think you need an applaud for this, when I check it out or the second time around.
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Aw, this is such a beautiful poem. It glows with love, and warmth, and even though we sometimes can't say how much we appreciate someone, there are always other ways to do so. I especially like the 1 + 1 = 1, that was very unique, and simply gorgeous. Thanks for sharing this, it made me smile. Take care! xo
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Sometimes telling a person they are appreciated and loved for who they are and what they do is difficult. You have done just so very well. Liked this.
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this is a nice honest love poem that reveals your emotions and has a nice flow well done
love and light
blaze -
Many people can relate with your poem which makes it all the better. It is a good poem. The flow could be slightly better but overall great job and good read! Keep up the writing!
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This is so wonderful to read, dear. Not many can find a peace within as such. You have uplifted me today in ways I cannot convey. Unconditional comes in so many forms, but can hold pleasures in the sharing more so than the rules. I thank you for posting this so I could find some peace within again today. rose
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really a very sweet poem clara...and i love the "addition" at the end. and the repetition of "alright" within this poem was very well-placed, almost read like a song. good writing!
Jo -
wow, I love it. It is something sorta like I wrote to this guy I have been talking to forever and it reminded me of him so it was kinda touching to me I really do love the way you use words. I am not always good at that but I try. but it was a great poem and I will be reading a lot more of yours. I dunno if it will be tonight but I will
Much Loves
KLA
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This is very sweet. I love the imagery in this too. 1+1=1 was really cool. I really like this poem and thanks for sharing.
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