A kiss most sensual graces my lips
I look around to the beautiful glade
And my eyes rest on the most incredible sight
You
There is a glint in your eye, and I understand
Your hands move from my face slowly to my shoulders
Your very touch sends shivers all the way through me
Shivers of love and anticipation
I close my eyes to draw in your presence
I feel your hands move to my back, your breath on my cheek
You whisper in my ear... are you ready
I open my eyes, look in yours, and you know
You push me gently to the soft green grass
It caresses my bare flesh, and you compliment the sensation
With a soft kiss to my forehead, you ask the question again...
Are you ready, my darling
Eyes closed, I nod a yes
You kiss my lips and gently push inside
I flinch for a second, you check I'm okay
You continue your motions, our bodies together
Our hearts, minds and souls together
Building up to one perfect moment
The moment we fall tearfully into each other's arms
You tell me I'm perfect and you love me
I tell you I can't live without you
I can't breathe without you
I can't be without you
You're perfect
I love you
Author notes
Written on 13th December 2002
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A contest entry
- Your love by tylersgirl12.
300 points, ended October 11, 2004, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very beautifull and very seductive at the same time i love this piece. makes me wanna get my man right now lol anyways keep up all the good work i look forward to mor
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This is soft and sweet, but had passion in it becasue of the love. Great work the feeling that the person your with really loves you adds so much more when you make love. I enjoyed the flow as always wonderful worrk SH
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I love this! It is soooo beautiful and I can relate to it....awesome job... keep up the amazing writing!
Love
Brandy
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wow...this was a great write...it was deep and full of love..im in love and i can relate to this...good job...keep on writing..
*-AmberLeigh-*
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I'm sure your love was as flattered as humanly possible. I send my congrats to them for finding such a lovely soul who expresses themself as such.
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excellent
awh that is such a sweet poem, beautifully written :)
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