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The Fall (Cinquain)





Drifting
t'wards the open
sea, fallen leaves gather
momentum in the torrid
river.



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Written October 5th, 2005

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  • cutiepie gold member
    October 6, 2005
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    Yes there are a few lurking as I also love this form. Thank you for your kindness it is greatly appreciated

  • Willow
    October 6, 2005
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    I love the form cinquin. I find this is one of the best I've ever read. You have taken a snapshot and brought to clearly to the reader. It doesn't hurt that Autumn is my favorite season. I will have to check your authors page to see if you have more cinquains.

    s and ♥
    Willow