amber wings
at play in autumn leaves--
butterfly waltz
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Written October 5th, 2005
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groovy
awww, thats so beautiful! awesome job ^_^ i really like it, i dont generaly read such short poetry, but the name caught my eye and im glad that it did!
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wow that was probley my favorite one good write for a short one.....keep it up
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Lovely poem. Very musical and evocative.
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wow this is very short but very intriging i liked it u did a good job here ya i call moi ex gf tina butterfly all the tyme thats like moi name 4 her so i liked this one bout butterflies good job hey u should look at moi poems sum tyme Nd ttell me what think
jason -
A wonderful haiku.
Happy New Year.
Shahrzad -
Thank you so much, Nena...I'm honored by your lovely comment. I'm so glad you stopped by...you gave me a wonderful smile this morning
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This is such a magnificently sweet and beautiful haiku... penned with such delicacy. I truly enjoyed the reading of this beautiful piece. Thank you for sharing with me and for the precious gift of your gracious pen. Blessed be, Nena.
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Thank you, wolfman...glad to stir up warm memories Hope they involve a wolfwoman
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good work
hmmm, a warm kind of memory comes to mind, nice small piece of work. -
beautiful Such a peaceful write, you painted a vivid image in my mind. Your imagery in this great and you show instead of tell which is really, really good when writing a Haiku. Amazing! Brilliant work
♥
~Lana 
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So sweet
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how did you get this name. i loved that poem
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This is lovely... really a beautiful image you paint.
Nicely done, enjoyed it.
~ Wendy
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Yeah, Tre...you just about hit the haiku nail on the head Thanks for your kind words...
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haaaaaaaaaaah!
so thats wat haiku is! It waz short and it made sense. I like it. Its just like tellin a story in less than 10 words and the advantage of everyone knowin about it. Great stuff. -
Ah, what a breath of fresh air. Nice one!
This reminded me of last weekend when Master Maria, Heather and I were out in the field behind the school. The biggest Monarch butterfly I've ever seen was fluttering around at the far end of the field. I pointed at it, and dang it if didn't come right over and say hello to us. lol Very sociable.
Autumn rocks, doesn't it?
Take care buddy
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Thanks for the compliment, Lena. I would never claim to be talented at haiku...just working on it. I deeply appreciate your encouragement.
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nice imagry and a lovely haiku
I used to not like these little poems but over time I realise that they are wonderful as long as someone talented is writting them
huggles
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I think this is my favorite by you. You've got a lot of talent from all that I've read of your stuff. I really like haikus and you do them so well. There's a lot in one haiku rather than just a bunch of words put together. This was real good.
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Short and sweet. Very well done. Description is lovely.
Peace
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What a lovely moment you have captured in this breath-taking 'ku. I am quite fond of them although I am quite selective of which ones I actually post online. I have truly enjoyed the image that plays out so naturally in my mind here. Excellent piece.
Bella the monk
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Karen...it's just started to turn from Summer to Fall here in the canyon. It's lovely. Thanks for your lovely comment...it's nice to be back
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Well Thoreau...I haven't learned to fly-fish, yet. But it's on the list Know any good streams?
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Me too...Jenn. And thanks for Nina
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I love fall and this brings so many fall pictures to mind.
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good work
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Thank you, lady rose...haiku is a serious challenge: how to say a lot by saying so little. Escpecially interesting for someone like me, who enjoys saying so much with so many words. It's funny how poetry can be a lesson for life.
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Nice to see something new. welcome back.
Beautiful job here. you always have been able to say so much in so little.
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So very lovely!!! Perfect way to describe an Autumn imagery
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short and sweet
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amber....beer.....mmmmmmm......beeeerr.....yum...
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Finally you came up with something
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Ankita -
I liked this a lot! this form can be hard to pull off..but you seem to have done it very very well!
A pleasure to read this short sweet little haiku!!
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So happy to see something from you!!!! Soooo beautiful too! What gorgeous imagery this brings! Autumn is so breathtaking!! You've captured its glory in so few well chosen words. Very nice!!!!!!! ;f Karen
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yes...how lovely is the autumn with the leaves changing..you have captured the visual on this so beautifully..thanks for brightening my day
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