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thoughts about death

when life seems curled
  and all mest up-
when everything lays on the
            rox
and all mest up
when the waves seem more to spit acid
       in the face
then to relax
      or nurture the soul
one wants to let it all go!
 i am sick of Chinese food
   i gave the rights to my books
          to Jackie-again!
    i don't ever want to go to sandusky or Cali
      i am sick of living-
   and i have a plan.
    i am out like an old fart in a game of cards.
      i am aware i am making no sense
             killing ones self never does
         but it's a choice that person makes.
          even while hurting the ones u love-
   maybe ending my breath will save them from a life time of
          mental anguish!

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Written October 5th, 2005

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  • evilbatwoman
    October 19, 2005
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    You have been disqualified for the improper use of the word "then."
    4EVER BEIN ME,
    WESLEANN